Tuesday, March 23, 2010

Week 11

Information I gained from the critique.

What I took from my critique on my first spread was that it was very busy, not necessarily in a bad way but it could use some uniformity, especially in regards to the text and how it was placed around my images. I plan on coming up with some sort of "style" so to say that will run thought out my magazine. By making this change I will be getting rid of the confusion the reader might have when reading my articles.

My attention was also brought to the spacing in relation to the text and an image, an image and the boarder and so on. That is just something that you don't catch right away. The last thing was brought to my attention was my first 2 pages and how I should concerned using the entire page spread to grab the reader into being interested in the art work that is to follow.

So I have taken all of this into consideration and have made most if not all of these alterations plus some.

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